I love writtings like this.I find it the only way to speak my mind without being torn apart,since I'm not good with opening up...>.>

Anyway,very nice,I really liked it.

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Fantastic, I love your writings...<3

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I've read this about 4 times now and I still can't decide if I like it.

There's no denying it's a spectacular piece of writing, the emotions put across are intense and it lets one in on a terrifying darkness that's inside everyone.

Maybe that's why I can't decide if I like it or not, because I see a bit of me in there.

You certainly have a gift for words.

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Let's divide up the world
into the damned and the saved,
and ride to the valley like the old light brigade.
And straighten our backs,
and we won't be afraid
and they'll celebrate our deaths
with a national parade.

Fantastic, I enjoyed that.

I particularly enjoyed the teensy little infinity symbol at the bottom.

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The infinity symbol can get overused, but it is truly deserved here. A point to you for noticing it.

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はじめまして! _{Artist, Writer/Poet, Photographer, traditional medium mostly, anime, sci-fi and the bizarre.}

Thank you, I think that's a natural way to feel about a lot of what I want to express which has a darker sentiment to it. I'm not seeking attention, it's simply things, very real experiences over time that need to come out. The media makes it difficult for me to decide how to really feel about self-hate -- the glorification of it so often keen or shallow. I should like to have known what it was like to be completely free of it, accepting it at this point, as part of my internal make-up.

I altered two of the words, which I think helped it be more concrete in it's expression.

I'm asking it to, but awful doesn't seem to need a lot of language to explain itself, if any. Like the infinity symbol and things joined thusly, the experiences make me stronger at the same time that they make me weaker. Perhaps many artists feel that way, the ones gifted in high sensitivity.

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はじめまして! _{Artist, Writer/Poet, Photographer, traditional medium mostly, anime, sci-fi and the bizarre.}

There was a time when I'd never have been able to express this. It was held deeply inside like an ugly pearl, so I do understand.

Art, creativity is what helps me to open up.

Thank you.

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はじめまして! _{Artist, Writer/Poet, Photographer, traditional medium mostly, anime, sci-fi and the bizarre.}

You're very kind.

It's ironic, I want others to understand at the same time that I hope they never do.

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はじめまして! _{Artist, Writer/Poet, Photographer, traditional medium mostly, anime, sci-fi and the bizarre.}

No problem.=3

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